Tick List ๐ โ AQA English Language Paper 1: Student Response & Performance Tracker
Fiction - English Language PAPER 1
AQA English Language Paper 1 - Student Answer Checklist
Student Name: _______________
Exam Date: _______________
โ Section A: Reading (40 marks)
Q1 (4 marks) - Identify and retrieve information (List 4 things)
โ Student has identified 4 correct points from the text
โ Student has used accurate wording from the source
โ Answer is clear and concise
Q2 (8 marks) - Language Analysis
โ Student has written about the effect of language techniques (e.g. adjectives, similes, metaphors, personification)
โ Student has selected relevant evidence (quotes)
โ Explanation shows a clear effect on the reader
โ Uses subject terminology appropriately
Q3 (8 marks) - Structural Analysis
โ Student has identified at least two structural features (e.g. shift in focus, sentence length, juxtaposition)
โ Student has explained how structure impacts the reader
โ Quotes are used to support points
โ Clear and logical explanation
Q4 (20 marks) โ Critical Evaluation โ
โ Student has clearly responded to the statement and given an opinion
โ You must say whether you agree or disagree at the very start.โ Ideas are supported with relevant evidence from the text
โ Use well-chosen quotes to back up your points.โ Evaluation explains how the writer creates an effect
โ Donโt just say what is happening โ explain how the writer makes it happen.โ Student has analysed both language AND structure
โ Comment on word choices and how the text is organised or shifts.โ Answer is well-organised with a range of ideas
โ Paragraphs should flow, and cover more than just one angle โ aim for depth and variety.
โ Section B: Writing (40 marks)
Q5 (40 marks) - Creative Writing (Descriptive/Narrative Task)
โ Student has chosen either descriptive or narrative approach
โ Engaging opening that hooks the reader
โ Range of vocabulary used effectively
โ Uses a variety of sentence types for impact
โ Includes figurative language (similes, metaphors, personification)
โ Clear structure (beginning, development, ending)
โ Spelling, punctuation, and grammar are accurate
โ Paragraphs are used effectively for clarity